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Ulric Bainard OC by Sinroock Ulric Bainard OC by Sinroock
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I like the rough lines here. I'd like to see more of this design, because from the shoulders up it's pretty interesting, but there's so much more than just a bust when character design is involved. From what I can see, you're really good with expressions. Also that's some really believable hair for so few lines. The shape is very solid, and making wigs to imitate it would be easy.

It looks like you're going for something that would fit in with Eat-Man, and if you haven't read that manga yet you should totally go dig it up. I think the aesthetic would totally appeal to you based on this alone.

It looks like you're in transition here, and I'm going to just point out a few directions that you might consider taking based on what I see. Rough lines generally stand out more when they're bolder and darker. It looks like you're starting from the 80's and 90's school of manga art with delicate lines, and working your way toward something more raw and jagged? Fine, lower-opacity lines are great when they're crisp and smooth. They stay out of the way and aren't really part of the composition. They're just there to tell you where stuff goes.

I think this would have more visual weight if you did something more with your inking, be that a bit more play, some extra texture or involvement, or even just noodling with brushes until something feels a little more hefty.
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It's good that you have your own style which is kind of messy, and it looks fine with the sketch lines and being a bit messy it adds to the uniqueness of the work. However I would remove the sketch line down the centre of his forehead as it looks weird and doesn't fit in while the others do.

Despite it being messy you've still managed to define the details and get everything looking good. I think you should continue with your style as it's unique and does look good but try to make sure that it's still semi neat and every line belongs, otherwise it just looks like a mess.
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bpollyack Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
This one is my favoirte ! ^^ I just love the blue hair and matching eyes--- and the scars.. is that weird? lol Well great drawing! 
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Sinroock Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks. Its absolutelly not weird. In fact, I will try my best to finish him tomorrow :)
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bpollyack Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome! looking forward to it ^^
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Sinroock Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:)
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Keyninn Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Simply amazing! Thanks for sharing. ^^
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Sinroock Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you and np
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yakkingyetis Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
everything looks great but maybe if u remove the sketch lines it will look better ?
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Sinroock Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks for the feedback but The messyness is my style.
I like things messy, Im weird I know haha xD
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yakkingyetis Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014
haha
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Omnimon1996 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
So awesome! :wow:
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Sinroock Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks :D
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Omnimon1996 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
No problem! :)
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Brung Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
nice
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Sinroock Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks sir :)
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